tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3249314933943866343.post2624033686071420991..comments2024-03-28T00:46:14.378-07:00Comments on Spungella: We Women - CritiqueJean-Denis Haas http://www.blogger.com/profile/16123475853304267584noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3249314933943866343.post-78838917467151625912010-04-16T12:41:24.436-07:002010-04-16T12:41:24.436-07:00Hahahaha! Oh Bernie...Hahahaha! Oh Bernie...Jean-Denis Haas https://www.blogger.com/profile/16123475853304267584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3249314933943866343.post-56936714724839065882010-04-15T23:40:41.776-07:002010-04-15T23:40:41.776-07:00OMG!!!! I met her once!!!!
She is AWESOME!!!! A l...OMG!!!! I met her once!!!!<br /><br />She is AWESOME!!!! A little noisy, but looks like a good person.Bernie Warmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07793108994473790995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3249314933943866343.post-38887984046497269282010-04-15T15:50:49.230-07:002010-04-15T15:50:49.230-07:00@Alonso: The very talented Lisa Allen did that. Wa...@Alonso: The very talented Lisa Allen did that. Watch out for her, she's going places!<br /><br />Thanks for the feedback!Jean-Denis Haas https://www.blogger.com/profile/16123475853304267584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3249314933943866343.post-64448271830741859262010-04-15T15:35:39.882-07:002010-04-15T15:35:39.882-07:00who did this?
it's really strong. Main thing...who did this? <br /><br />it's really strong. Main thing I think needs addressing is the right hand on the mug, coming in the first time. It feels a little magnety, snapping right to it. Just a frame or two more of touching then sliding (like sliding into the handle) would help, also a little bump in the mug, she's hitting it fast, it should be displaced a little. <br /><br />The thumbs stand up a little akwardly. <br /><br />I think the shrug is really beautiful, but I see JHD's point that a different choice might resonate slightly closer to the line (though depending on context the current choice may work find).Alonsohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02805049234657129031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3249314933943866343.post-68818924985501515692010-04-14T16:48:40.109-07:002010-04-14T16:48:40.109-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Lukas Niklaushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08958972425676824362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3249314933943866343.post-22712518519206917552010-04-13T17:03:21.230-07:002010-04-13T17:03:21.230-07:00This looks great! My suggestion would be to keep t...This looks great! My suggestion would be to keep the hands on the cup on the final shrug, have the shoulders do what they're doing, but drop the head a little. Well done.Hand powered Coffeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16871429509261017395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3249314933943866343.post-6734763412644516712010-04-13T16:59:33.115-07:002010-04-13T16:59:33.115-07:00looks really cool and sincere. my crit, it should ...looks really cool and sincere. my crit, it should close the pose on " how we women are".Herman Gonzaleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12820275662006354119noreply@blogger.com